Friday, 15 April 2011

Evaluation


Friday, 8 April 2011

Final Cut
















After receiving feedback from our shown rough cut, we decided to use the feedback to improve our final cut. We fixed the shaky camera and cut out the modern day televisions. However, we found it 
difficult to cut out the modern day cars, however, we zoomed in closer to our car in order to block out more of the surrounding, modern cars. Another improvement we made to the final cut is that we added 50's style music into the background when we walked into the milkshake bar. This music fit into the right timing and to cut out some of the background noise. We found that these improvements were the best way to improve our film.

Rough Cut

This is our rough cut which was shown to a small audience of media students. We recieved various feedback which we are going to use to improve our work for our final cut. The feedback we were told to improve on was:
- Make the camera more staedy
- Cut out the modern day televisions
- Attempt to cut out the modern day cars
- Speed up the car chase
- Improve transitions
- Improve sound
we will take these comments into consideration while working towards improving our final edit

Animatic

Friday, 28 January 2011

Initial Ideas